How to Message recruiters on LinkedIn

Below is a sample of how to send a message to a recruiter on LinkedIn

Dear Sam,

I hope you are well. i noticed that you recruit for one of the companies i aspire to work for.

i am marketing manager with 5 years experience in the banking and retail sector. my experience includes running marketing campaigns for one of the biggest retail companies in south africa, managing marketing budgets to the tune of 40 million naira, and looking after a high performing team of specialist.

i am able to add value in the following roles; brand manager, senior marketing manager and adertising executive. i have attached my cv and i am available to discuss potential opportunities you may have.

Best regards.

Kenneth Obi